Welcome to the romance Writers Weekly blog hop, where every week a great group of romance writers answer questions and accept challenges. Diverse in what we write, we are unified in the quest to bring you, the romance reader, a very happy ever after.
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Our challenge comes from Dani Jace – Flash Fiction: Pick a short scene from a book, movie or TV show that didn’t go the way you wanted. Rewrite the scene the way you would have written in 500 word or less.
Okay, maybe it’s just Halloween in the air, but my head went here:
Today I’m doing a rewrite on a classic romantic film. Stop this video at the 1:30 mark, because that’s where I’m giving them a different reason to be Sleepless in Seattle:
Sleepless in Seattle.
Dumbstruck in the road, Annie struggled for words. A car horn blared in her ears. Sam’s eyes widened.
She turned to confront an approaching taxi. The driver skidded his breaks while motioning, pointing toward the curb.
She spun and took a step toward her car, ready to escape, as embarrassment washed over her. But the bushes on the hillside were alive, moving and shaking though there was no discernible wind.
Rank purification filled the air as a host of figures shambled out of the foliage. They’d once been people, or at least that’s what it looked like. Now gray skin hung shriveled on loose frames. Tattered clothing barely covered the animated skeletal remains.
Zombies? It was the only explanation that fit.
Annie backed away, back into the traffic. Speeding cars held only a fraction of the terror of the things that approached her.
“Come on.” A deep male voice from behind.
A warm hand clasped hers, pulling. Annie turned to stare into the piercing gaze of Sam.
“I don’t know what these things are, but we’ve got to get out of here.” His voice a calm oasis in the storm of terror that whirled through her mind.
He dragged her across the highway. Horns continued to blare around her, but whether they were honking at her or the hoard of zombies that pursued her, she couldn’t say.
Sam reached out and took the hand of the small boy waiting on the other side of the roadway. Is that Jonah?
“Everybody get in my truck . . . now!” Sam’s commanding voice compelled Annie to rush toward the vehicle. The woman . . . the one he’d hugged . . . clambered in to sit beside her in the back as Sam hoisted Jonah into the front seat then climbed behind the wheel.
The woman beside her was shaking, her eyes wide. “Where are we going?”
By the time Sam had backed out of his parking space, the creatures were flooding the street, the foremost already across and coming straight for the vehicle. He floored the accelerator, mowing down three of them before reaching the highway. “There’s a Wal-Mart about a mile from here. It will be our best hope of surviving this. They’ll have food, guns, and thick walls.”
He weaved through the heavy traffic as more and more of the restless undead appeared on the side of the roadway ahead. An invasion. An Apocalypse.
“I’m Sam, by the way.” How the hell could he be in such control?
“Annie.” She replied.
So, did they make it? Of course. Did they end up falling in love? Of course. Did anyone else survive? Hmm…
Okay, hop on over to see what Dani Jace rewrote as the Romance Writers Weekly blog hop continues at: http://www.danijace.com